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Kuroneko Hime by *Twigileia:iconTwigileia:

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Nothing breathtaking...just simple drawing,done during school.♥
It's my sweet OC,Kuroneko Hime,or if you want to,Black Cat Princess..in her cat-girl form.She is cute,isn't she?♥
If you want to know morw about her,you should read artist comments under my deviation Sekai.;P
So,I guess that's all,and I don't really have time to write this..I have to go to my friend's home..and learn maths..gaaah..:(
I love you my friends!Bye!

Sekai(Kuroneko Hime) (c) *Twigileia

P.S.:Critique,please!I have to know what I did wrong!!Pleaaase!

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:iconyaroumme:
=Yaroumme Nov 9, 2009, 9:09:16 AM
Hey dear! ♥
You asked for critique and here it is ;)
You really improved alot as I've been watching your steps as how you know.
But You definetly should work on the Arms,legs,the face and how to place the breast.
I know I know,its not easy!
But get to your problems fastly as how I try-fight with the problems you have then you'll improve even faster!
The pose always looks a bit the same-she or he always has the same elegance to stay.It'll be better to let the person look even more alive.
Not that she should be moving or something-just there need to be more energy,feel and love!

To the colouring:
I like your colourings and yeah,I think youre better in colouring then me :XD:
And your details are awesome! :clap:
But try to get more softer into the colouring.
Because(in my eyes) the colouring looks a bit none feeled.
no sense if you dont understood ^^;

To tell you:
Its never a negative critique dear!!!
I mean it nice and Im sorry if it dont comes alike it ^^;
Thats why I dont want to do any critique.
I hope you understood dear ;)
:hug:
Yaroumme ♥
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!xx--dark--angel--xx Dec 17, 2009, 12:23:38 AM
I love the Bg twigi <3 Its so pretty and pourple and i like the way you choose black as her costume its such a nice contrast <3

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Vergil:mmhmm:)
Dante:What the hell are you talking about?:wow:
Vergil:I dunno I hit my head pretty hard when I landed:XD:,Any way I think its time for a marshmellow ride!MARSHMELOOOOOW!!!!
CG-Chan and mookie:w00t:We are the marshmellow lovers :love:
:icontwigileia:
*Twigileia Dec 22, 2009, 9:18:54 AM
Thanks,CG-chan!You like purple?:P

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Sarcasm is love.:blackrose:
:iconxx--dark--angel--xx:
!xx--dark--angel--xx Dec 23, 2009, 6:29:33 AM
Of course its an epic colour my room is purcle <3

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Vergil:mmhmm:)
Dante:What the hell are you talking about?:wow:
Vergil:I dunno I hit my head pretty hard when I landed:XD:,Any way I think its time for a marshmellow ride!MARSHMELOOOOOW!!!!
CG-Chan and mookie:w00t:We are the marshmellow lovers :love:
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~CorieVampire Nov 15, 2009, 5:32:50 AM
O moj bog, kak lpo to zgleda! <33 Nore lase ma, ozadje je tooooooooook lepo, da barv ne omenjam... :heart: :heart: :heart:. čist edino kar mi ni tok ušeč so oči pa ramena, drugo je pa tok lepo da se kar zjokaš <33 Fejvam itq a ne <33 :clap:
It's damn gorgeous :XD: ^w^< <3333

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Ilu. <33
:icontwigileia:
*Twigileia Nov 29, 2009, 6:05:59 AM
Hvala,sweetie;P

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~kowai-usagi Nov 14, 2009, 7:49:24 AM
Math is funny in middle school, take it as a game; it is always the same rules and the same applications even though it is not always the same setting (it is the same as playing handball, the aim is still to get the ball in the goal although the players are not at the same place).

As for the drawing. She has really nice hair! Global proportion (head-legs-arms) is right, although the forearms are a little too long. ;)
Also, when holding an object, the thumb is on the same side as the fingers or is press against the object in opposition to fingers' force, else it would fall.

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As soon as you can scream, do it! .:>0<:.
:icontwigileia:
*Twigileia Nov 29, 2009, 6:07:37 AM
Uh,uh..maybe you're right,thanks=)

Thanks,I'll try to do it better next time:hug:

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:iconkowai-usagi:
~kowai-usagi Dec 3, 2009, 3:05:44 PM
No problem! :aww:
I'm sure you will. :hug:

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As soon as you can scream, do it! .:>0<:.
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~kerry483 Nov 14, 2009, 1:13:49 AM
Very cute style XD
:3 ^.^ :kitty:
<3 kaitlyn ~Nya!!

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:icontwigileia:
*Twigileia Dec 22, 2009, 9:33:48 AM
Thank youu!!

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